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nitromaxx98
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PostSubject: WOOT!!!!   WOOT!!!! Icon_minitimeThu Apr 14, 2011 7:45 pm

My Son wrote:
Well, it’s been fun
It sure has been a ride through the deep scary section of my body called my mind,
Many tales of oddities have risen to the occasion
My “Mental Marines” if you will.
But I hope all that meet the soldiers of deep thought will have a great time hearing their stories
And learning about what goes on in the battlefield-like mind of a 14 year old freshman.
But perhaps my poems will be forgotten
Perhaps the apocalypse will come and shall wipe out all humanity.
But what if this poem is to survive?
What if humanity is saved by a few wishful thinkers?
And a book of tales found in a ruined school?
But that’s beside the point,
I guess I should just thank someone or something.
Such as the teacher, the pencil, the paper, and the mind.


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dz724
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PostSubject: Re: WOOT!!!!   WOOT!!!! Icon_minitimeThu Apr 14, 2011 8:02 pm

Love it!
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The Other One
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PostSubject: Re: WOOT!!!!   WOOT!!!! Icon_minitimeThu Apr 14, 2011 10:46 pm

My Son wrote:
Dad,

I need lunch money.

Congrats to your son, nitro.
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PostSubject: Re: WOOT!!!!   WOOT!!!! Icon_minitimeFri Apr 15, 2011 5:16 pm

The Other One wrote:
Congrats to your son, nitro.
Congrats from me, as well, Nitro. Very impressive!
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PostSubject: Re: WOOT!!!!   WOOT!!!! Icon_minitimeSat Apr 16, 2011 2:19 am

Sounds like old coffee house poetry. It's like deep daddio. Cool
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